基础题
基础题:
题目:请用模板写一段话,描述你昨天去公园的经历(50词左右)。
要求:包含时间、地点、人物、事件、感受。
解答过程::
1.
确定要素:Time (Yesterday afternoon), Place (City Park), Person (My friend and I), Event (Flying a kite), Feeling (Happy).
2.
套用模板:
- 开头(背景):Yesterday afternoon, my friend and I went to the City Park.
- 发展(事件):We flew a kite together under the blue sky.
- 高潮(细节):The kite flew so high that we shouted with joy.
- 结局(感受):It was a wonderful day full of laughter.
3.
整合:Yesterday afternoon, my friend and I went to the City Park. We flew a kite together under the blue sky. The kite flew so high that we shouted with joy. It was a wonderful day full of laughter.
变式题:
题目:将上述基础题改写为“挫折类”记叙文。
要求:保留时间地点,改变事件为“风筝断了”,并增加心理描写和结局感悟。
解答过程::
1.
调整逻辑:
- 开头:同上。
- 发展(冲突):Suddenly, the wind blew hard and the string broke.
- 高潮(心理/动作):I felt disappointed and watched it fly away into the clouds.
- 结局(感悟):Although I lost the kite, I learned that some things are meant to be free.
2.
整合:Yesterday afternoon, my friend and I went to the City Park. Suddenly, the wind blew hard and the string broke. I felt disappointed and watched it fly away into the clouds. Although I lost the kite, I learned that some things are meant to be free.